Another good read Brian! I like the music that you selected I think the music should be louder, especially in places where the madness begins. The deep dark thick forest, calls to those that want to end the insanity of reality.
I ran a marathon a couple of years ago in Seattle, WA I had to urinate so bad I couldn't hold it in anymore. On my route, I found a path that I thought was way out of sight of people seeing me urinate. After I did my peeing I realized I was lost in this massive forest I began to panic I was going in all directions trying to find my way out! I began hearing noises leaves crunching and getting louder coming my way. I fell to my knees and said a little prayer when I had finished I looked up and there sitting on the ground was a beautiful dog looking at me. I got up off my knees and slowly went to him. I asked him kindly if he could help me find my way out. He understood and walked me out of the forest that day I felt a sense of relief and cried my eyes out for a good thirty minutes. I was safe.
okay, I finally came back to listen to this. Really nice job on the audio--your vocals are great. The minor hesitation I had on my first read disappeared and I felt more captivated by this audio version. The only thing I'd say is that I find the background music levels just a bit too high. Now you've given me encouragement to try this.
Hey, that was really fun--will go back and listen to the audio version later after I walk by the Slough. I’ve heard there’s this monster seal out there.
Great story, Brian! It is definitely one to be told around a campfire. The audio narration and the production is outstanding, too. Did you use a certain program? The music in the intro and outro added a haunting/spooky element to the narration. The entire production is high quality from start to finish - kudos to you! 😀
okay, I finally came back to listen to this. Really nice job on the audio--your vocals are great. The minor hesitation I had on my first read disappeared and I felt more captivated by this audio version. The only thing I'd say is that I find the background music levels just a bit too high. Now you've given me encouragement to try this.
The Michigan Dogman
Another good read Brian! I like the music that you selected I think the music should be louder, especially in places where the madness begins. The deep dark thick forest, calls to those that want to end the insanity of reality.
I ran a marathon a couple of years ago in Seattle, WA I had to urinate so bad I couldn't hold it in anymore. On my route, I found a path that I thought was way out of sight of people seeing me urinate. After I did my peeing I realized I was lost in this massive forest I began to panic I was going in all directions trying to find my way out! I began hearing noises leaves crunching and getting louder coming my way. I fell to my knees and said a little prayer when I had finished I looked up and there sitting on the ground was a beautiful dog looking at me. I got up off my knees and slowly went to him. I asked him kindly if he could help me find my way out. He understood and walked me out of the forest that day I felt a sense of relief and cried my eyes out for a good thirty minutes. I was safe.
okay, I finally came back to listen to this. Really nice job on the audio--your vocals are great. The minor hesitation I had on my first read disappeared and I felt more captivated by this audio version. The only thing I'd say is that I find the background music levels just a bit too high. Now you've given me encouragement to try this.
Enjoyed your story .The ending was really good.The twist at the end
Nice work on the audio!
Hey, that was really fun--will go back and listen to the audio version later after I walk by the Slough. I’ve heard there’s this monster seal out there.
Great story, Brian! It is definitely one to be told around a campfire. The audio narration and the production is outstanding, too. Did you use a certain program? The music in the intro and outro added a haunting/spooky element to the narration. The entire production is high quality from start to finish - kudos to you! 😀
okay, I finally came back to listen to this. Really nice job on the audio--your vocals are great. The minor hesitation I had on my first read disappeared and I felt more captivated by this audio version. The only thing I'd say is that I find the background music levels just a bit too high. Now you've given me encouragement to try this.