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Oct 10, 2022Liked by Brian Reindel 👾⚔️

Another good read Brian! I like the music that you selected I think the music should be louder, especially in places where the madness begins. The deep dark thick forest, calls to those that want to end the insanity of reality.

I ran a marathon a couple of years ago in Seattle, WA I had to urinate so bad I couldn't hold it in anymore. On my route, I found a path that I thought was way out of sight of people seeing me urinate. After I did my peeing I realized I was lost in this massive forest I began to panic I was going in all directions trying to find my way out! I began hearing noises leaves crunching and getting louder coming my way. I fell to my knees and said a little prayer when I had finished I looked up and there sitting on the ground was a beautiful dog looking at me. I got up off my knees and slowly went to him. I asked him kindly if he could help me find my way out. He understood and walked me out of the forest that day I felt a sense of relief and cried my eyes out for a good thirty minutes. I was safe.

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Aug 3, 2022Liked by Brian Reindel 👾⚔️

okay, I finally came back to listen to this. Really nice job on the audio--your vocals are great. The minor hesitation I had on my first read disappeared and I felt more captivated by this audio version. The only thing I'd say is that I find the background music levels just a bit too high. Now you've given me encouragement to try this.

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Jul 29, 2022Liked by Brian Reindel 👾⚔️

Enjoyed your story .The ending was really good.The twist at the end

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Jul 27, 2022Liked by Brian Reindel 👾⚔️

Nice work on the audio!

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Jul 27, 2022Liked by Brian Reindel 👾⚔️

Hey, that was really fun--will go back and listen to the audio version later after I walk by the Slough. I’ve heard there’s this monster seal out there.

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Jul 27, 2022Liked by Brian Reindel 👾⚔️

Great story, Brian! It is definitely one to be told around a campfire. The audio narration and the production is outstanding, too. Did you use a certain program? The music in the intro and outro added a haunting/spooky element to the narration. The entire production is high quality from start to finish - kudos to you! 😀

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okay, I finally came back to listen to this. Really nice job on the audio--your vocals are great. The minor hesitation I had on my first read disappeared and I felt more captivated by this audio version. The only thing I'd say is that I find the background music levels just a bit too high. Now you've given me encouragement to try this.

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